did you guys enjoy this chapter of Fritz? I haven’t taken the time to read through it in full yet, and I’m afraid I didn’t get as much across as I wanted, or that its disjointed.
I did a lot of rewrites while I draw drawing.
Hmmm, I think I would have preferred if there was a chapter dedicated to the flashbacks, but I also think that the way you handled them was pretty interesting and I didn’t find the transitions confusing. I admit that I’m now able to sympathize more with Fritz and I’m quite curious to know what kind of relationship he had with his biological dad (will that ever be revealed?).